Blog Specimens #1

I chose these two blogs for my first round of blog specimens:

Blog Post #2: https://mtaylo7.wordpress.com/2010/01/30/blog-post-2-because-violence-is-everywhere-happy-tree-friends/

I smoothed out sentences and added to the conclusion.

Blog Post #5: https://mtaylo7.wordpress.com/2010/02/20/blog-post-5-because-people-with-mustaches-kill-people-bad-guys-sport-the-stache/

I smoothed out sentences and added a conclusion to the end.

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Published in: on March 17, 2010 at 9:10 AM  Leave a Comment  

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